I like your performance, it seems to fit the book smart Marie in the first act. Overall, you got a great audition!
Oh, thank you ☺️. Need a change somewhere though? (And also (in a world where you cast me as Marie) would I also do Act Two, or not? )
I guess adding stuttering and a bit more shyness will help her become more authentic, but your current performance fits well.
To answer your second question, Marie in the second act is already a mother who has grown from her high school days. Showing the change in her voice is a signal that she had become older, which I think your voice is much softer and fit more to her first act potrayal :-))
Oki ! So, even more shyness for Marie, got it. And yeah, for the other Marie, I'll try to make it more deep and rough, but I admit it's not really my thing. Meh, we'll see. Thanks ! I'll do that for you tomorrow.