I love the voice and the energy! My only notes for this one is that for the 'What the heck?' line, it's more of a "Ah, okay. Fine" tone rather than guilty. Like 'Oh, okay fine, you can go with her'. Other than that, I really like this one!
Thank you, I really appreciate this! Would you like me to send a re-do w/ the tone change??
That would be great, yes!