Very good job! Thank you! Since you asked for feedback, here we go: love the accent, love the vaguely psycho vibes I got in the latter two lines. For the audio quality itself there was some sibilance and clicking which isn't a huge deal because that can be corrected in post but the cleaner you can make it from the get-go, the easier it will be for everyone downstream of the recording.
I'll keep you in mind. I wish I could hire you all, so many excellent takes.
Thank You!