Lovely performance! A couple notes, however. Try taking slightly larger pauses between words, not too big to be unnatural, but to make it seem like she's still processing what's going on. And if you're able to, try making her a bit higher. Other than that, I really liked this one!
Thank you! I can definitely make my voice slightly higher. I'm also naturally a very fast talker, so often I forget to slow down a bit when doing auditions
Ah okay 😊 No worries