I would love to hear you redo this but with more spacing and slower. like dragging out the "no matter what you do" then maybe for the second one: "time will always -a little emphasis on the always to break this sentence apart- move on", then finally the last one being more stern as if its a last try to tell this person "so should you". Anyways thats just a little thing from me, loved your submission and best of luck against other people that audition!