Your voice is fantastic for the character. I have some comments for you still. You can sound lower pitched in the some of the high notes words, that's just a pronunciation so I think it's ok. And for the last line, you can sound a bit less angry
You can sound like the pitch in the reference audio or this audition: https://castingcall.club/s/5482545
Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate it! And thank you for the feedback and direction, I'll be sure to keep them in mind!
Actually if you sound close to the reference voice, it will be perfect but I know people's range is different so yeah just do it again according to the comments then