Great audition! Maybe make your voice a little deeper and booming, and give it some emotion, but nonetheless, its very good and promising!
also, just a little help on pronunciation for his hammer. Say it like this, "Mee-ol-neer"
Ok cool. If you would like I could give it another shot with your suggestions added
go ahead if you want, you don't have to do it, but I am a little curious... ~(*^*)~
Just submitted a new version, let me know what you think