Hey, I've got a few more lines for you to read for me.
(like the first and third lines in tone)
That day… on my way home from school… that day my life was changed forevermore.
What even is this shit?
Maximum revolution: third stanza, Divine finger.
What do you mean?
My name is Yumeho, and I am in my third year at Henshin Secondary School. I have a curse of knowledge. I know that the world I was walking in is fake.
I think you should give a little more emotion behind these lines. If you need more context for intention, I can give it to you if you need it.
In cute anime voice:
Please, please… I don’t mean to be any trouble.
I don’t like the course too much of a problem…
For these types of lines, I think I want you to go a bit higher if you can :)
Alright I’ll give it another go! :)