Hey, I've got a few more lines for you to read for me.
Hey, asshole! Don’t you see I’m busy!
Yume-chan, you know we care about you, right?
What’s your problem? Huh?
I think you could go a little harsher in your tone. I think you need a little more edge. Kirika is a loud character that needs to vocally take the audience's attention, particularly because you don't see them in this section. I think it would work really well for the character and your accent.