Under Her Wings
savvygothprincess for Double Cross
Voice Actor
Double Cross
open
Unpaid
One of the trainers for the duel between young Master Blueblood and Twilight Sparkle. Like her cohort Bladed Edge, there is more to this mare than meets the eye.
“Not
good enough, one hit wonder,”“Oh I dare, Princess. It’s so much more fun when they scream, don’t you think?”
“She just had to make everything more difficult. I despise ponies that get between me and my payday.”
Good, very good (or very bad I should say😉) the only things I might try changing is making it a bit more whispery and/or raspy and for the first line add a layer of mocking condescision one hit wonder should sound like an insult.
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