I would love to hear this again but slow it down a bit. Give me a performance. I already love your tone so try to FEEL the moments you're reading. Whether it's a break in stoicism, a moment of vulnerability behind the shield, etc., let me FEEL like you're in moment rather than reading well
Hey!! I'm so sorry, I didn't get a notification so I had no idea you left a comment :( I know it's waaay past the deadline, but I noticed that the role is still open. Would you like me to try redoing it? I could have it ready by tomorrow, as where I live it's the middle of the night right now. I'm still starting out with voice acting so I can't promise perfect results, but I can definitely promise to try my best :)