Class Session 2

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Class Session 2
edmundm199
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Ah very nice take here. A lovely brightness and smile comes through overall that makes for a very pleasant commercial read.

I want to draw particular attention to your pacing at "quality, classic, and practically perfect drink to satisfy and gratify your Bug Blood cravings." It's very well done here, you gave yourself space between each word and took the time to enunciate through the entirety of each word. Your natural speaking pace is fast, and your words naturally push into each other when you read. When working on articulation like we are here, it's important to do the whole read exactly like you took this section. Much slower than a regular pace with much more dedicated emphasis on each and every word.

Specifically take special care on the middles and ends of your words. You had a tendency in this read to drop consonants outside of the beginnings of a word. Making sure you hit each and every consonant will also help with slowing down the pace of the read and give you that extra space between words to articulate more.

These are the two things I'd like you to keep at the forefront of your mind when doing articulation reads in the future. Slow on down and pump those brakes. Hit every single consonant in every single word.

The way you hit the tongue twister for example was superb. Plenty of space, nice and slow, and potently articulate. The made up words you were so clear on the consonants that's the kind of attacks you want to hear in all your words during articulation practice! Especially in commercial land, where both time and clarity is a premium, working to balance absolute clarity at a continuous pace is an invaluable skill to continue to grow and nourish. Great read here, looking forward to more!

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