hi there!
i really enjoy your interpretation :)
for the improvement (that i will not ask for, your audition is really good it's just to letting you know):
second voiceline: you are forcing a little too much on your voice and don't take the time to breathe before, making the line a little unnatural. also, the old senile is a comic character, the madness in his voice is not to take too seriously.
good points: (because there is always good points)
first line: your laugh is literally what i have in mind for him! same for the tone/voice that you using. it doesn't feel too old but we still understand he is not too young anymore.
your acting is really good
thanks for your audition CrimsonCarl :)
Thank you for the pointers and complements. Not going to lie, this was fun to voice as well. For the second voice line, yeah it did feel forced looking back, I think I tried to over sell it on that one. And I love doing manic laughs, and any opportunity to do it, I'll do in a heartbeat just for fun haha. And thank you for the opportunity as well. Picked or not I am genuinely looking forward to this project. :)