Hello there! I like your voice for Takashi, but the emotions you gave him weren't what I was looking for. Would you mind auditioning again? I want to provide a few pointers to help you understand what I want from Takashi. For Line A, I like how you greeted Kaname. Where the problem lies is when Takashi's supposed to be smug. "You didn't quit on it, did you?" I want it to sound like you're mocking him, and I feel like your rendition of Takashi is too passive. I can sense it in the sentence after, but I want to hear more. By all means, I want Takashi to sound like an a-hole. For Line C, Takashi didn't sound angry enough. You had a good start with the "C'mon," but you ran out of breath when you went to "Say something." For the entire duration of Takashi's anger, take that intensity you gave it for Takashi's "C'mon" line and keep it throughout. And don't run out of breath when you get there also. Overall, you should sound pissed off! And lastly, "If you won't talk, I'll make you talk!" You're supposed to be yelling. Once Takashi says this in the game, he swings at Kaname. Dig deep. This is the line where you bring out the anger. I believe you can do it. And Line B is perfect, by the way. Besides that, I would appreciate two takes per line.
Hello Studio Grigs! Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to resubmit a new audition with all of the amazing pointers you have given me! Thanks a bunch!
