This is great acting, but it's not necessarily how I imagined the predators sounding. It should be lower and more softly menacing, not shouting.
Would you appreciate a redone audition with this voice direction?
You don't have to make a new audition if it would be inconvenient for you. I know you can do it. I'm thinking of casting you for this role anyway, and if I do, I could give you further direction then.But if you want to give it a second go, my "audition" would be the type of voice I'm looking for.