I loved how you recorded the line "For the most powerful being you are quite skittish" You captured well the mockery in her voice. But the microphone is making it a bit hard to appreciate your work, do you believe you could improve the sound quality?
I do- I had only just thrown my new studio together when I sent this out, but i do a lot of audiobook work so can make quality better.
Have sent a new file- can also re-record anything you need!