I know its lateb but if you have the time I would love some feedback. I am brand new at this and would appreciate any opinion. Thanks
There is a loud hum and you sound distant. You omitted the word 'any' immediately before "that grew in the garden". It did not sound like you enunciated "emeralds" well nor the word "little", before "close to the". Weird emphasis on "real", after "Turn them into" and on "to", in the middle of "real to everyone". Your reading sounded decent, but I could not hear it closely. If I had to guess, I would say you are using the microphone on your desktop and you are speaking from w/in a closet in the same room. The sound quality needs to be addressed before you go any further.