I greatly support what you are doing and would love an opportunity to be a part of the program. I welcome any feedback. Thank you.
I appreciate your support :). There is an echo throughout and I am not sure what is causing it, but you should try to get to the bottom of it. The words you choose to emphasize is hit or miss and overall your reading lacks energy. You had some trouble w/enunciating the word 'little' in the context of "And she come close to the little rabbit". The other times it came out just fine. I have still have the same issue myself, on occassion, but I am getting into the habit of saying it like I am sounding it out. All of these things can learned and if you can just fix the echo, we would be happy to have you participate in the project.
Thank you :) I will work on the echo mystery and add some energy to my narration and send a new demo.
Okie, good luck !!