I would love feedback, if you can give it. If there's any call for it, I can do a decent southern accent. It didn't seem to fit with The Velveteen Rabbit.
There is bunch of noise at the beginning, before you start speaking. There is also the presence of an echo throughout. Rubbing sound after "[...] and fell to the ground". Background noise after "[...] and out of it there stepped a fairy". For the purpose of this project, you would also remove your heavy breaths. Mouse clicks at the end. If you ever hope to do this professionally, you will need to learn how to edit your work. The echo could be cause by the space in which you are recording. If that is the case, recording in your walk in closet will resolve it because of all of the clothes. The rubbing and background noise can easily be removed using audio editing software. I suggest you try standing while recording. I think that will help w/the heavy breathing.
Thanks for the feedback! I don't know much about editing, but I'll give them my best shot. I will also try to find a place to record where the echo won't be so bad.
You can use one of these to make a sound-proof blanket fort: https://www.vocalboothtogo.com/product/sound-blanket-producers-choice-with-grommets-black-and-white/
With the comments on the background noise and the like, I'm happy to run an edit through it and you can compare the difference if you'd like to send me the raw file :)
I really appreciate the offer. I would love to hear it without the echo. How would you like me to get the file to you?