I thought this was a great sound for Hans. I'd like you to try it again, just take the lines a little bit slower. For Mercury, we're losing the "yur" sound in the middle of the word, make sure we can catch that. What is your recording set up?
Thank you! Sorry about the missing "yur" with Mercury, that's probably my pronunciation. As for my setup, I'm using a HyperX Solocast mic (albeit a slightly damaged one), and editing with Audacity, so not the most high quality. I'll make sure to do another take, and send it over.