Late to reply but despite the mic quality being decent in the "Hello" line, not having a pause between the "My name" and "landed" parts, and my intention for you to say any line besides the one deviated from Peni's introduction scene in Into the Spider-Verse (which you did with the "psychic link" line), I compared your audition to clips of the character and you sound kinda close to Kimiko's portrayal of her. I bet you either watched the movie or looked at the screenplay. Welcome, Aspen, or should I say, Peni.
Thank you for letting me join your project! And I apologize for using a line in her introduction scene, I didn't realize my mistake until now. I have watched the movie as well!