I really liked the tone you put into the lines, especially the first line and the third line. The first one gave me a vibe of Chara sounding both friendly and sure that Frisk wouldn't make it through alive without her help, and I really liked your take on the third line especially. I got a sense of spite out of the third line, a bit more of a tone of angry jealousy rather than despairing loneliness, and since I feel like that line could go either way that was a nice touch. :) Thanks for auditioning!
Thanks for the comment I appreciate the feedback! Cant wait to audition for he musical
I'm also working on an Undertale Christmas Carol musical, so you can audition for that as well once it's up. :)