I can tell that you either read the screenplay of, or watched, Into the Spider-Verse as you said one of Peni's lines from the actual movie. Now, let's get to what I think, your take on her introduction is good on the first take, your "Hello" is good on the second take, and your third line is also good but to me, the voice doesn't really match the actress' voice for the character. Shortlisted though.
Thank you for the feedback!