There seemed to be a bit of mic feedback there that made your voice not as clear as it could have been. I did however like that little pause you did in between "I heard the stories many times, but I never really believed them" and "Until I fell down there". I felt on the third line you started off being quite a bit louder than the other lines, so I felt kind of caught off-gaurs a bit at first. Thanks for auditioning! (PS I like how you called your Soundcloud audition "Some Shitidk" :))
I might be getting a new mic very shortly because of my voice acting projects and i'm still practicing so i'm not always the best and thanks.
I was also going to redo it actually but i left it alone? i still have the new audition though.
You can redo it if you'd like. :)