you have a lot of room noise and need to cover up with a blanket. the reverb is there. since this is an original character it's bit more difficult matching the impression. performance wise I thought you did the best, but you def need to clean up your audio and learn more about it. You also hit your mic towards the end. Make sure not to be so close. Thanks for auditioning.

I can hear you having fun in this which is great. I think you coulda had a bit more rasp. Def cover up with a blanket or get in a closet. Lots of muffly reverb and room noise. and you hit the mic a few times. Thanks for auditioning!