Extremely solid performance! The way you took your time with your pacing not only elevated the tone of your voice, but it also allowed to you space your words clearly and hone in on your articulation. Very solid. My only real feedback for you is to find ways to make the read more interesting to listen to; you honestly already are doing this with your fun little inclusions and changes in your voice, but some small portions of the read felt just a tad monotone. Overall though, this was one of my favorites to listen to! Well done.