I like the energy here! My main criticism is that you were pacing yourself too quickly. It felt like you were blowing through the read, which in and of itself is not a bad thing, but your words were not as articulate because of it. Now, that said, I did feel that you improved rapidly throughout the course of the read, but I still feel that slowing down the overall read would truly add to your performance! Your energy is on point, and the passion in your voice feels real. Well done!