I liked how you maintained an enthusiastic tone throughout this audition. And you singing "so, come on in" and including "ooooooh" to put a smile on the listener's face was cute. The only thing that I caught was that you said "representative" instead of "representatives." But good work!

Your energy is so contagious! I love that I can hear your smile through the headphones, that shows how much you are putting into the performance. My only real critique is to make sure that powerful energy isn't making your articulation suffer. Honestly your take had a lot of clarity, but I did feel that many words were a bit slurred together when they should sound more crisp and precise. Finding a way to combine clarity with your fun energy will be essential to your inevitable success! Praciticing and keeping up vocal exercises will immesnely help with this. Well done!