This is a nice take… A couple of things to note, which may be unique to the delivery of this piece, but watch your melody. Many lines are following the exact same vocal pattern. This is a really easy trap to fall into, so try to think about key line delivery before you record so each line doesn’t sound so similar. Also, be careful with the delivery of lists. While the lists sound different than the rest of the piece, it is easy with this many adjectives, to sound like you are just reading a list of words instead of actually describing something. Lastly, I know regional dialects play a role, but some words seemed to have stress on an uncommon syllable. Be sure that this is an active choice (which it might be) and not just habit. All in all though, nice take with clear speech. Well done!

Great job, Zachary! I liked this take, it was felt unique while also nailing some of the basic requirements we are looking for from a submission. The pacing is nice and steady; it doesn't feel rushed or too fast to the point of poor articulation. I would recommend adding an additional layer of energy, perhaps adding more of a passionate tone. The read felt a bit too much of "the same" all the way through, and adding more emotion would help that. Great work!