great energy! sounds just like an advertisement~

Your voice fits a performance like this perfectly! By adding just a bit more energy, I think your passion would be felt to a tee. It's so close, trying adding more of a smile to your take to make it sound more genuine! The life is definitely there, though. Articulation is overall good, and I think with that added energy, your projection will also get to where it needs to be. This was very fun to listen to! Well done!