Love the energy, your endurance is impressive! Stumbled words could be fixed with multiple takes and editing as you know, but the pacing and energy stayed consistent and rarely felt rushed or strained. Great job in my opinion!

Hey, nice job! The read was smooth and the pacing consistent, which is impressive. That said though, I would recommend slowing way down. Right now, while I can understand what you are saying, you did trip up a few times and I noticed you took a lot of shallow breaths while trying to go as fast as possible. By taking it a notch down and focusing entirely on articulation, you'll be able to sound more professional and focused. Great work, though, loved the read!