Well done on this take! I REALLY like your pacing, many people think that going fast is the goal here, when really it's all about articulation and clarity. While I do think you could work on finding ways to make your voice clearer, overall I liked your articulation; just keep practicing the vocal exercises discussed in class! Make sure to keep that slow pace whenever possible; your future takes don't have to be SLOW, but I would rather hear a slower take where the speaker takes their time to nail their clarity than a take that is fast for the sake of speed. Overall, nicely done!