You did really well with keeping the energy up throughout the monologue! Though the speed change is great it was pretty jarring. it would have fit in better if you started it at "two to a customer"

I really like your voice! The commercial tone really fits the read and script, especially with how your portray it with your projection and articulation. Make sure not to go TOO fast, although I do have to say your pacing was also on point! Keep up that high energy, that's something that many beginner VOs struggle to realize is important and I can tell you have a firm grasp on that. Well done, keep up the nice work!