I love how around the 1 minute mark you began to speed through the prompt a bit, just like in the fashion they would in actual commercials lol. I will say that you definitely brought a noticeable and enjoyable life into the prompt, but more-so towards the end than the first quarter or so. That aside, I feel like this was a great read, and as fun to listen to as it was when you produced it!

Hey, great job on this! I really like your voice here. The pacing, particularly after the beginning, is really solid, allowing your voice to really hit home. I would recommend keeping that pace slow throughout the entire thing to make your clarity 100%. From here, add more PASSION to your voice! Make your listeners excited to both listen and buy your product. Fantastic job! - Joe, CC TA