Session 1

Melody Rainelle for Homework

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Melody Rainelle
Session 1
Morris Seng
Morris Seng

And where do I sign up for that elusive credit card programme? Kidding aside, I think that the breaks at the start of read might be too long.

Joe Goffeney
Joe Goffeney

Hi Melody! First of all, I really like your pacing. The articulation was nice, with only a few spots where I felt like your words slurred together a little bit. Now, take that nice pacing to the next level by finding a more natural way to bring these sentences together! The pacing and clarity is more important, so keep that up while also finding that natural tone. Great work, and thanks for your hard work with the multiple takes~! - Joe, CC TA

    Melody Rainelle
    Melody Rainelle

    Thank you for the feedback! This was an interesting assignment since the words and sentences don't all naturally flow together; I'm sure that is part of why Mr. Carlin himself delivers them rather quickly and why they come across as humorous. I only listened to his performance after I recorded and submitted my version. I will certainly bear your feedback in mind. Thank you.

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