Sounds like you have a bit of a slur. I feel you could work on moving your tongue more and controlling it to enunciate better! :)

Great take! My number 1 feedback for you is to slow your voice down to really focus on your articulation. It sounded like you were trying to race through the script, when instead I should be feeling EXCITED by what you are bringing to the table! I would rather the read be very slow but very articulate than fast but hard to understand. Keep up the good work! - Joe, CC TA