The Haven Chronicles: Window of Opportunity
izanagi for Slater
Vincent Slater is an attorney, he is focused only on the truth of the matter -- weeding out the lies to distill the truth of what happened on Haven.
Alright, thank you for joining me today -- for the record, my name is Vincent Slater -- i'll be your attorney for this entire process. All I ask is that you keep things simple and stick to the main story, I don't have time to waste with you slipping back and forth between stories and narratives. We need to boil things down to the simple, pure, truth.
Oh also! If you have any comments or suggestions for improving, I'd be happy to hear them as well!
Hey! So I like your voice, i like your mic quality, but you're... delievery for things is off. There's no better way to describe it than that. closest thing would be saying it feels very rushed. There's also (and this isn't ALWAYS a bad thing) very loud breathing noises. I personally don't care but a lot of other people do. You are still in consideration at this point though -- as all that stuff is something that can be worked around. just weighing through all the auditions and waiting for the casting call to end.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I actually really appreciate it. The rushing was somewhat purposeful but now I see how it's not really preferable. I'd be happy to give it another shot with some changes if that could help!
Entirely up to you. I have no objects to resubmitting at all