RWBY Abridged Part 2
Lindz for Pyrrha Nikos
So Pyrrha... Oh man, well she will be drastically different, she will be a depressed celebrity that wants nothing to do with anyone. She wants to basically kill herself and is very suicidal. But she does not have the courage to kill herself so she enlist as a huntress so she can at least have an excuse to her death. But to a surprise she is very skilled in fighting so there goes that plan. I normally would not leak my characters story like this but since she has a touchy subject i didn't want to catch anyone by surprise to something they are not comfortable voicing. But I need emotions a lot of crying and screaming but she also a comedic relief too so don't mistake it for just a depressed character.
(talking about the cereal box) yeah it was cool but it ruined my entire life
(hanging from a tree) Jaune, I would switch with you… but...it wouldn't be enough to end it
(comedic line) don't worry she will cave one day
Your voice it is almost like Pyrrha which is awesome. But what I like the most is your second line you gave one where she didn't get sad and another where she did which is more options for me to use. The only thing I think you could do better would be your last line they sounded the same a bit of difference would have been perfect. But still good job. :)
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