Remnants of Smash Casting Call #2 (A Smash Ultimate Machinima)
MidnaUchiha16 for Bayonetta
The baddest witch to ever grace the game of smash.
Bayonetta joins the cast as a rather mysterious character. In the first season she'll have her name dropped alot amongst the cast, appear in flashback scenes with Palutena and just small appearances at first, but she'll make herself well know as the show progress. With appearances starting in Ep3 and onward.
For Bayonetta she's in the same situation as shulk, I don't mind if you give her an accent as she's well known for but putting your own spin on how the character sounds is greatly appreciated.
1). Bayonetta: Palu~ I'm homee. Oh! I loveee what you've done with the place! It's uhh a little to bright for my taste but ya know i'm not one to judge *chuckles*
2). Bayonetta: *laughter* Ohohohoho. Ahhh.. How delightful~
3). Bayonetta: Ohhh.. poor pit haven't you heard the phrase? It takes two to tango...*slight pause* and three's quite the crowd. (Playful then Cold)
Hey, VAST improvement in your recording environment choice. There was hardly any noticeable background noise during your audition. Keep it up! :D
thank you :)
Piggybacking off of what Boaz said, this was definitely an improvement. I'm happy you were able to resubmit your audition reel.
thank you very much :)
Third echo if tht's okay, this is a major improvement to your original take. There is of course some things to improve on, but nothing in terms of re-recording your audition. Just make sure to try and remove and access noises that make their way into the recording, like I could hear a few instances of lips making noises. But that will improve over time when you become more aware of breath control and other general things. But this is so much better than your original take, keep to this one and you will improve even more over time.
thank you :)