Hey, VAST improvement in your recording environment choice. There was hardly any noticeable background noise during your audition. Keep it up! :D
thank you :)
Piggybacking off of what Boaz said, this was definitely an improvement. I'm happy you were able to resubmit your audition reel.
thank you very much :)
Third echo if tht's okay, this is a major improvement to your original take. There is of course some things to improve on, but nothing in terms of re-recording your audition. Just make sure to try and remove and access noises that make their way into the recording, like I could hear a few instances of lips making noises. But that will improve over time when you become more aware of breath control and other general things. But this is so much better than your original take, keep to this one and you will improve even more over time.
thank you :)