Remnants of Smash Casting Call #2 (A Smash Ultimate Machinima)

victor hale for Snake

victor hale
victor hale auditioning for Snake in Remnants of Smash Casting Call #2 (A Smash Ultimate Machinima)
TheSonOfBoaz
TheSonOfBoaz

A friendly suggestion if I may. When recording lines, try to cut a take where you mess up. On that first line you slipped up for a second and kept going. It's a good rule of thumb not to stutter unless directed to do so. Also, I'm not sure what type of mic you have, but try to reduce the amount of movement that goes on while recording. It was hard to hear you at certain points. Keep improving bro :D

Rhys Drakins / Rhysins
Rhys Drakins / Rhysins

Echoing what Boaz said, there is a lot of movement in this take and it takes away from the overall performance trying to be make. The little sounds can ruin an entire take if not noticed. Make sure to listen properly to everything that happens in your takes and make sure you sound as clear as possible while there is as little to no other noises in the backkground as possible. Keep improving though, you'll get there with time.

victor hale
victor hale

In that case Would it be better if I updated it? Or are these finalized

Snake
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Snake

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Role went to: ChiefJerky

Solid Snake is the chief of police in New Donk City, he helms over the police force and manages fox as well as many of the other police members. 

For snake I just want your best take on his impressions in the game.

The sides they read from:

  • 1). Snake: I see.. Well I don’t know how else to tell you this but.. if this case isn’t resolved soon. It will be out of our hands shortly.

  • 2). Snake: The department wants us to move on from this case McCloud. We’re getting more cases stacked up in our library by the day and…(Concerned)

  • 3). Snake: Yep.. that’s our job for ya, not one damn break yet. *chuckles*

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