Just as a heads up, while it is nice to show that you are a fan of the creator and their work as well as the Smash community, it is very pointless to do this in voice over auditions as it just wastes time for the creator to listen to auditions. It took three minutes what could have been done at the very most in one minute with three takes for each line.
In that case would it be better if I updated it or submitted a different audition or is this finalized?
You can remove your old audition (unless that is exclusive to different memberships on the site) and upload a new audition. Nothing is finalised until the deadline ends, thats the case with most projects at least. Someone else has done that here and their audition improved drastically after feedback, so I'd imagine you can do the same too.
