The First Spark (The Holy Storm, Part/Book 1) - [SEMI-ANIMATED FAN-MADE OC WARRIORS SERIES]
Project Overview
Flamekit has always known his heritage; his father a WindClan deputy and his mother a kittypet. Because of this, from his very first days in camp, he's been bullied by the older apprentices and silently mocked and judged by warriors and elders alike because of his kittypet blood.
After his father dies in a battle with RiverClan, Flamepaw flees WindClan and abandons his sister, Redpaw, scared what the other cats will do now that his father, their only protection from the cruel cats who hurt them, is gone.
He finds himself in ThunderClan, where he meets Lightningpaw, a new apprentice who recently lost her sisters and parents to an cause unbeknownst to him, and the kittypet Stryke, who wishes to be a warrior, and the mysterious loner, Stripe, who Flamepaw can't stop talking to. Tensions are high as WindClan pressures for their lost apprentice, while SkyClan's leader continues to bombard the ThunderClan camp and territory with attacks in a move for territory due their growing numbers.
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That is the official summary for the story that this is based off of. The published parts can be found on Wattpad, though most parts are unpublished due to editing. The story can be found on @followingsaturn's profile, and the story includes characters that belong to @bluefeladela (Blue) and Stripe.
The plot is original, as well as the characters. Please respect that.
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There are a few characters whos names will be the same as those in the canon series. Please do not make rude comments about that. It is not on purpose, and we tried to avoid that the best we could.
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Feel free to audition for any role you'd like! There are 20+
Dark ginger tom with a pale underbelly and muzzle and amber eyes Widely seen as being unapproachable, Flamekit/paw is a rather distrusting, almost rude cat. He doesn’t mean to be, but he’s naturally always tense due to what happened when he lived across the stream.
For the kit portion, his voice would be rather squeaky, however as he gets older, it will get slightly deeper. Please keep age in mind. He is still rather young,
"Why don't you pick on
someone your own size!" (Can be slightly squeaky, as he is a kit
when this line is spoken. He is however, a little angry and is trying to get
the other cats attention off his sister)Say something you think would fit"What should we do? I mean... we can't exactly fight. We just
became apprentices." (Nervous, anxious about what’s coming next)“Sorry, I’m not one for chatting.” (Almost annoyed, dismissive)
- pause between these two lines -
“You want me to fight the house cat?” (Confused, slightly shocked)
Grey she-cat with patchy darker and lighter fur. Yellow eyes.
Energetic is the one word needed to describe Lightningpaw. A little ball of excitement, she tries to make friends with Flamepaw right after he comes to ThunderClan. Despite this, any talk about her past will make her extremely upset, and will often result in an angry Lightningpaw.
Voice could be either a child or teen, as she is just cast as an apprentice.
"Hi! I'm Lightningpaw, What's your name?" (Energetic, kind)
"--And that's my nest. Oh!--but there's an unused one right over there, next to mine!" (Kind-hearted, excited)
"I don't like to talk about it..." (Upset, dismissive)
Large ginger tom with darker stripes, a pale underbelly, and blue eyes.
A determined house cat, Stryke is ready to do whatever it takes to join ThunderClan. He doesn't get off to a very good start when it comes to interacting with Flamepaw, but a friendship quickly blossoms between himself and Lightningpaw.
"Who are you? You don't smell like the clan-cats do." (Alarmed and confused)
"I want to join your clan. All the cats in Twolegplace talk about the cats who work together out in the forest in order to survive. Who are all one huge family. I want that." (Determined)
"Is that all you've got?" (Grunting, slightly smug)
White she-cat with faint blueish-grey tabby stripes along her back.
Stripe is a rouge who lives near the edge of ThunderClan territory. She isn't afraid to voice her distaste for the clans, specifically ThunderClan. However, she is a good listener, and despite her prickly exterior can be a good friend.
"You're not a clan cat." (Confused, cautious)
"ThunderClan's the worst. Trust me, I'd know." (That last part can be a bit angry, kind of like a growl)
"You're a bit past the border. What do you want?" (Annoyed)
Light ginger she-cat with blue eyes Unlike her brother, Redpaw has always been a bit more social. Originally, she’s more temperamental, though this changes as she gets older. She has always been feisty though, and that’s never faded and never will.
For the kit portion, her voice would be a bit squeaky, however as she gets older, it will get slightly deeper. Please keep age in mind. She is still rather young,
"I should’ve saved him! Why didn’t you let me past?" (Voice
should be thick with a mixture of anger and grief)*Muffled growl followed by a yelp*
"Thanks Dapplepaw. Maybe we can train together sometime!" (Cheerful
and excited, however it’s clearly dismissive)
- pause between these two lines -
"Thanks Dapplepaw. Maybe we can train together sometime!" (Cheerful
and excited, however it’s clearly dismissive)
"We should go back to camp anyway. If Ravenstar's there it might not be
an act of war." (Rationally, reassuringly)
Dark brown tom with amber eyes The ring leader of the group that bullies/bullied Flamekit and Redkit, Burnpaw is actually more self-conscious than people think. To the main characters, his past is unknown, yet sometimes other clanmates can be heard speaking of his father, the former leader, who was harsh and originally forced him to be a medicine cat. He became a warrior apprentice after his sister died in a badger attack and his father fell ill. He is the eldest apprentice by two moons.
"Get off you little brat!" (Angry, irritated)
"Okay guys. What should we teach him first?" (Clearly
amused and taunting)"C-Cinderstorm." (Suddenly a little nervous)
Black tom with a scar running along his jaw and icy blue eyes This tom follows Burnpaw/pelt around like a lost puppy, despite being twice his size. He’s one of the cats who would often taunt the kits, however there seems to be some kind of plan in motion against a particular cat, making Hookjaw seem much smarter than he first appears to be.
"What do you mean? You were okay with it six moons ago." (Angry, growling)
"You really want to take /us/ on kittypet?" (Through fits of laughter. Clearly amused, yet still threatening)
"Ease dropping kittypet? That's not very nice." (Angry, threatening)
Dark grey tabby tom with yellow eyes.
Cinderstorm is the father of Redkit and Flamekit, and he is Deputy of WindClan. He's a more righteous cat, however nothing comes before family for him.
"Are you bullying Flamekit again?" (Irritated; accusing)
"Redkit, she gave you her courage. I have never seen a cat so ready to protect and defend as you." (Proud, chuckle a little at the last bit)
"Barleypelt what happened to you?" (Shocked, alarmed)
Light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes,
Haystar is the leader of WindClan, and she is the youngest leader. However, she is known for her thoughtfulness and readiness to try for peace.
"RiverClan is on their way! They have already taken out Ryestorm's patrol. We must be prepared. Stormshadow, take a patrol of our fastest warriors and find out how far from camp they are." (Commanding yet calm)
"From this moment until you earn your warrior name, you shall be known as Flamepaw." (Tired, yet steady and somewhat reassuring)
White tom with black splotches and yellow eyes.
The ThunderClan leader is known for his decently violent ways, believing it is the best way to solve conflict. However, he does not always resort to it, and will often speak with Haystar over some quarrels. He's a serious cat, usually seeming to lack emotions. However, he will open up to some select cats.
"Why are you here kittypet?" (Somewhat distrusting)
"Juniperclaw. you will train this young apprentice during his time here with us, as I will not halt a young cat's quest for knowledge. I trust that you are ready for this task?" (Serious, yet respectful)
"Orcidwind. I've been meaning to speak with you." (Ever-so-slightly happy, yet continue with the more serious tone)
Grey tabby she-cat.
Orchidwind is a kind-hearted she-cat. More trusting than she probably should be, she is very accepting. She isn't to big on being untruthful or violent, however she will never not fight for her clan.
"He says his name is Stryke. He wants to join ThunderClan." (Speak with a kind tone)
"This is a bad idea--" (Warning tone)
"I knew you could do it!" (Cheerful, supportive)
Black tom with white paws and amber eyes.
Juniperclaw is one of the more senior warriors of the clan. He's respected, despite being more than a little neglectful to his apprentices, often being "to busy" to train with them,
"Is it alright if we ask you what you are doing here, and why you aren't on WindClan territory?" (Comforting, yet cautious)
"Of course Birchstar." (Serious, yet slightly distracted)
"We'll go battle training later. I've got to go speak with Doerunner." (Dismissive, distracted)
Light grey tabby she-cat with unusual violet eyes.
A kind she-cat with a tough exterior. She isn't very feisty, but is fierce when it comes to protecting her clanmates.
"Don't bombard him with questions Pantherpaw. He looks scared stiff." (Scolding, yet soft)
"He's always like this with his apprentices. Its not you. Its him." (Slightly annoyed, yet kind)
Grey--almost black--she-cat with amber eyes.
Blazingpaw is an irritable, not very easily amused she-cat. She's the youngest apprentice before Flamepaw and Redpaw rank up, and she hated it. She pushes herself to be the best, and is a very skilled apprentice.
"Get off of WindClan territory!" (Angry, Irritated)
"Clingy, aren't you?" (Slightly annoyed, yet still a bit less guarded)
"Hey Redpaw, fancy meeting you here." (Amused)
Long-limbed black tom with amber eyes.
A bit of a show-off, Pantherpaw is always ready to prove how much better he is than every other apprentice. He dislikes the idea of allowing foreign cats into the clan.
"Stop struggling! We're trying to help you!" (Annoyed, voice is muffled)
"Hey Lightningpaw. Why don't you come hunting with us?" (Suggestive, a bit of a taunt towards Flamepaw and Stryke)
"What! No! Why would you--" (Shocked, alarmed, embarrassed)
Darker furred brown tabbu tom with hazel eyes and a white right fore-paw.
Not as much of a show off as his brother, however some times he can be a try hard. He tries to be nicer, and will often apologize for his brother's--Pantherpaw's--brash behavior.
"Oh shove off Pantherpaw." (Annoyed, irritated, defensive)
"Sorry about my brother. He's a bit... much." (Apologetic, chuckle a bit at the end)
Black tom with brown splotches along his body; long-tail.
Spiderpaw is rather quiet. He doesn't speak much, instead choosing to observe and act. He's intelligent, though snappy. He doesn't share his brother's egos.
"What do you want me to say?" (Irritated, dismissive)
"Ow! Watch the tail!" (Pained. Angry)
Slim dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes and darker ginger rings around tail.
Pepper is the mother of Flamekit and Redkit. She is a rather kind-hearted she-cat, yet she is determined. She is extremely protective of her kits.
“We’re almost there!” (Tired, out of breath, yet hopeful)
“Levin no! You can’t take him!” (Distraught, horrified)
“I’ll be right back, I promise...” (Startled, motherly)
Anyone who auditions will be given a cat or two to voice. These will be your set cats. They don't have many solo lines though, if any at all, so they are here.
"Whats going on?" (Confused, alarmed)
"What's with all the racket?" (Raspy if possible. Annoyed, and with an older tone)
Any lines you want to try to show off your voice
While I will be doing a lot of the drawing, I'm unfortunately not the best at backgrounds. I'm looking for individuals with a decent style for backgrounds, and if you'd like payment I'm sure we could look into something.
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While I will be doing a lot of the drawing, I'm going to be busy with everything else as well. I'm looking for individuals with a decent style who could help with coloring and shading and such, and if you'd like payment I'm sure we could look into something.
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