Great audition! If you have any way of making your microphone a little clearly, that would always be great. I also noticed that a good bit of the emotion you expressed sounded artificial. If you get the role, we can always work on that!
Oh you actually heard my audition. That's nice I guess. Also I'm surprised that you criticize me by my acting. nobody has ever done that yet. And for my mic I dont know what to do I use a USB mic and I use 2 socks as a pop filter so...
For the sound, try one sock. Your voice just sounds a bit muffled. And of course I heard your audition. I haven't had the chance to give tips or feedback yet, so I decided to stay up a little later tonight (well its morning now), to give some. Critisim is always something one wants when acting, so we're able to get better. As of right now, the creator of Stryke's character wants you to voice him, so if chosen in the end, we can of course work on making your emotion more real and heart-felt. The best part of acting for me is becoming the character, and it really helps when it comes to making your emotions sound real.
Oh I just realized this was actually the last audition i made without amplification that's why. Also I'm not implying that I hate criticism I'm all for it, it's just that nobody rly watched my auditions on youtube so it was quite shocking that you actually reviewed it. I do admit thoguh that I rushed this audition and for that I apologize