Fallout Radio - RadiOhio
Airick for Radiohost
Expect this to be around 28-30 lines at most.
This is RadiOhio, bringing you the latest news from nowhere. Good news for once! Some nearby vault opened recently, bringing with them several cases of ice-cold Nuka-Cola. Stop by your local trader to grab a bottle, supplies are limited! Seriously. Speaking of refreshing, here's some music.
See any feral ghouls recently? Neither have I. Some vigilante has decided to take it upon himself to go on a crusade against the radioactive dead. I still wouldn't recommend going out at night, though. More music, coming your way. RadiOhio.
In recent news, a stash of books was uncovered from the old university. More fuel for the flames, I guess, since illiteracy is at an all-time high these days. Keep listening to RadiOhio, folks. Now, some music.
Your voice is clear, and your delivery is definitely interesting. A few things though: 1. I appreciate some of your improvs, however I just wanted to mention the way you delivered the first bit of news altered the story of it a little bit. The news was about a vault opening, and the dwellers bringing out several cases of Nuka-Cola with them - your delivery implies the vault opened and someone found some inside. 2. It's "ghoul", not "ghost". I'm not entirely sure whether this was an improv in an attempt to add some character or not - if it was, I appreciate it, but it may or may not cause some confusion. Still, your voice-acting is good enough that I'll consider your audition.
Improvisation was required here as the line, "Some nearby vault opened recently, bringing with them several cases of ice-cold Nuka-Cola" was genuinely confusing when I read it. Glad you enjoyed the clarity and the delivery.
Thanks for the feedback on that line, I'll see about editing it. Anyway, I'm sorry - but I'll have to reject your audition. It's good, but I feel like a few of the others are closer to what I'm looking for. Yours was good though, which is why I want to ask: would you mind if I used your audition in a Youtube compilation video of "runner-ups" on my channel? I can link to your Casting Call Page.
You're welcome to it. Enjoy!