Persona 5 Comic Dub
MrNightshade for Akira
Background: main character or protagonist of Persona 5. One night he sees a drunk man basically trying to rape a woman, Akira saves her by slightly pushing the man who falls and hurts himself. Since he’s a politician, he makes the woman lie about what happened, and sues Akira. In the process his parents agree to have him live somewhere else for a year while he’s on probation, he ends up living with Sojiro Sakura (a friend of his parents) in Yongen-Jaya and going to school as a transfer student at Shujin Academy.
Personality: in the game, he doesn’t talk much, but everyone admires, listens, and trusts him as the leader of the Phantom Thieves, he’s also quite confident, straightforward, and honest to others.
Character Reference:
Come on Mona! (Tauntingly/teasing)
(Laughing) High Five bro!
Persona!
Any feedback is always appreciated. Also, I apologize for my weird laugh.
Of course, doing some critiquing tonight and just wanted to say that I like the quality of your microphone, but I feel as if you could be more... lively in the second line, if you need context for the comic dub it's in the description for the casting call, but Akira should sound more thrilled and proud of himself and Ryuji for putting Mona into a costume.
Thanks for the great feedback. I'll try reading it again with a more playful and victorious tone. If you could provide a link to the comic itself, I think that would really help to picture what the tone should be, but if you can't that's fine as well.
No, I can't, it wouldn't be fair to those who have already auditioned or reauditioned already. But I do wish you the best of luck in your reaudition!
I see that's fine then. Thanks for the feedback and the response.
You're welcome.
i adore your voice! amazing job!
Thanks! That's very kind of you to say.