WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
BrooklynDizzy for Sin Kiske
Dizzy and Ky's half-gear son, Sin has been under Sol's care and tutelage for more than 4 years now with the latter beginning to recognize his growing power. Similarly to his mother, Sin is little more than 5 years old, yet his appearance remains physically as that of a young adult as well as having similar magic abilities like his father.
Sin's mind is still immature, yet he understands the importance of decision making and the eventual outcome. He's currently at odds with his father, as a result of him sealing his mother, yet tries to reconcile him eventually.
Voice Type: Medium, Medium-High; Innocent, cocky, and full of energy.
(Voltic Deign) Here! (Attack Connects) Voltic Deign!
(R.T.L) Sorry. (Attack Connects) But this one's all mine!
(Raiden) HAAAH! (Attack Connects) Taking it to the edge! (After Attack) Drop DEAD!
Still getting that accent on this one, but you're at least masking it better with the more emotive voice have here. Sin for some reason seems to be the role of many over the top shouting that I favor in terms of his personality, though I think you may be taking it a step too far here. Tone back a little bit, and space out your words a little bit more, as some sound like they're running into each other during your readings, and you should be squared away much better.
Sorry about the spacing, I just made them closer together while editing out the bad takes to make it shorter. Hold back? Really? I didn't think I was giving it enough ^^' Not sure what accent your hearing, but the one I used wasn't my original after all, so maybe it just slipped through.