Operation: PGR Fandub Project
OffscreenkillVD for Lee
The straight man and tech guy of the Gray Raven squad. He’s the most logical of the three in the Gray Raven, but don’t mistake it as him being cold; he’s a lot more caring than he lets on and it shows a lot when it comes to people he cares about, especially his younger brother Murray.
Midrange young adult male. Usually aloof/flat if not mildly snarky and lecturing, but capable of softening up in sincere moments. For voice reference, I’m looking more for something similar to his ENG performance.
Voice Reference:
- english
- male young adult
(lecturing/scolding) Yes, you did. But for this, you’ve been heavily wounded, our most important Commandant nearly died, and not only so, even Liv’s lost her combat capabilities.
(lecturing/caring) Don’t push yourself. Extended mind linking will cause you harm. How many times do I have to tell you?
(matter of fact) Leading the team? I’m more than qualified.
Thank you for your interest in the project! I will say that you nailed Lee's scolding and lecturing voice very easily. I certainly felt like I was being scolded at like a child while listening which was really great and on point for his character. I also really loved the deep inhale and adlibbing you do by adding "Is that what you wanted?" at the end of your second take of the first line.
A few comments: I was hoping for a softer, more caring sound with the second line and the direction feels a little monotonous, so ranging your pitch when saying certain lines would be helpful in this regard. You already do good with stressing different words and adding little sighs and even adlibs here and there, so really, the only thing that needs a bit of work is playing around with the range of pitch sometimes in the lines.
Aside from that you did good with performing the lines and if you're interested at all, feel free to submit another audition with the feedback I have in mind! Otherwise thank you for your interest.
Thank you for your extensive Feedback! :D