Hey Stan! You sound really confident with the script even from the first 30 seconds, which I think really shows your energy w/the script. There are some words where it feels like you're very loud on one syllable, then trailing off on the rest, which can make some words a bit hard to make out (ex. "EXtra", "STYle", "SERvice", etc.). Regardless, you sounded like you really knew the style/vibe you were going for when reading!

Hi Stan! I liked your pacing, although I can tell that you did go a bit faster as you continued reading the script, which felt a bit jarring. This is an easy fix, so I'm making you aware of it! My main critique for you is to REALLY ramp up your energy! Instead of 100%+ energy, this felt like maybe 30%. Do whatever you can to raise your energy level, whether it's projecting from your gut or using your hands and body to TRULY embody the character. But yeah, you're definitely on the right track. Nice job.