If that's not a car dealership ad voice, then I don't know what is, haha. That was fun to listen to!

There is so much energy in this. I love it. I actually perked up and got into it. The change in tone at the end was also excellent. The only critique I have is that the energy level (while still high) seemed to drop a little bit over time, and there were a lot of big breaths. I would guess because this is such a large amount of text to try to get through. Bravo!

I can tell you had SO much fun with this read! Many people don't realize that you can easily hear the smile in people's voices, and I can tell you were smiling throughout this entire read. I am impressed with your speed and how you were able to keep up the energy! The main flaw I could find while listening was really just the breathing. Your articulation was great, and your projection was also impressive (although I personally feel you are at 90%, give it that additional 10% energy!), but there were a few times where your voice was thinning out quite a bit due to lack of breath, affecting the flow of the read. If you worked on your breathing a bit and gave just a bit more energy, I'd have no complaints! Great work.