Days Gone: The Story of a Survivor (Visual Novel)
ShinyTurtw1g for Lucille
Lucille is a hot-head who is very good at reading people. Having been through many unfortunate events in her life, she has always found a way to power through. Although she can be angered easily, Lucille truly looks for the best things life has to offer. She does have a difficulty of letting people close to her emotionally, but once that barrier is broken she really opens up and lets you see her for who she really is. Lucille is able to protect herself physically, but acts irrationally when her emotions get the best of her.
Lucille has a medium voice. A loose EMOTIONAL reference would be Asuka Langley from Evangelion.
Directing people to their bunks. (Blunt) "This is where you'll sleep. It's not much, but it's not like you did anything to earn it. Dinner is in an hour. If you need something....figure it out for yourself."
Notices Julienne's shorts are a bit too short.
(Honest, No snark or sarcasm) "You gotta be careful with shorts that short kid. Your brother can't always watch out for you. There's no laws here...well, not for everyone."
*Julienne points out that Lucille's shorts are shorter than hers*
"*genuine laugh*..Yeah...but I'm grown. You're what, 12?"Someone has stolen from Lucille's bunk
(angry, irrational) "Alright. Which one of you took my shit? HUH!? You want what I got, go out there and find it yourself!!!"
Yay! I'm glad you auditioned for the role! The voice is so great for Lucille, but I feel like you could really bring out her anger more. The 2nd line is fantastic, and I love it. In the first line, I like that you gave her that sarcastic vibe, but I'd love even more sarcasm and some anger. 3rd line she's pretty much enraged. All in all, great job!
Cool, thank you so much! If you're alright with it, I'll submit another take with this feedback incorporated!
Feel free to submit a second take if you'd like! I'd love to hear it!